King Arthur, a junior at Oceana High School, moved to the Bay from Compton in 2002. Arthur likes hip-hop, photography, and he's a big sports fan. His teams are the Tampa Bay Buccaneers, Los Angeles Dodgers, and the Denver Nuggets. Michael Vick and Alan Iverson are his favorite athletes. After high school, Arthur wants to study broadcasting at Cal State Fullerton, then become an NFL sideline reporter.
For the past year Arthur has been seeking a relationship with God. Most mornings he reads the bible and prays before school, and 2-3 times a week he studies the bible with friends at the Bay Area Christian Church. Arthur would like to be baptized sometime soon.
4 comments:
This is a great profile of this person. It is short, sweet, and gives past, present, and future plans of this individual. Your links are also embeded really well with your writing. I'm guessing, from reading your other posts, that you are writing about whatever interests you, or comes to mind. The only thing I'd say is add more about who this person is to you. How did you meet him? Is he a family member? It's a good story and you obviously know him, but it might be more engaging to know how you came to write about this particular person. This post reminds me of highlights I used to write about athletes for my high school yearbook, I couldn't find an example from a yearbook, but here's one about a female athlete who goes to Ithaca College.
Hey Larry,
I like your site. Your articles seem a little short though... I wish you had written a little more about Arthur Kelly. Anyway, I like your blog. It looks nice. You don't have a lot of pictures, but I guess in this case, it works. I like it.
Hey Lar, good stuff. Your profile writing is good man, the thing that confuses me is that it's the first profile on your blog, and carries no explanation of how you know Arthur or why you're writing about him. Now, maybe i just need context so bad in my life that this bothers me, but the writing was good and you told us some "beneath the surface" stuff about that kid.
Hi! This is kind of off topic but I need some guidance from an established blog. Is it very hard to set up your own blog? I’m not very
technical but I can figure things out pretty fast. I’m thinking about making my own but I’m not sure where to start.
Do you have any ideas or suggestions? Thanks
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